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Start — The armor does not fit. It is a hand too wide at the shoulder, a knuckle too lon (ready)
The decision is made mostly by her feet, which are already moving left while the (ready)
The right track turns out to be a very good idea right up until it isn't. Wren k (ready)
Wren climbs, armor ticking against bark each time she misjudges her new width in (ready)
Wren picks her way down the root-tangled slope, one gauntleted hand braced again (ready)
Wren's mouth moves ahead of her better judgment. "That box," she says, and her v (ready)
Wren holds perfectly still, which is harder than it sounds in armor that is dete (ready)
The whole truth comes out faster than Wren expects — the dead knight, the armour (ready)
The branch shifts again — closer now, and this time it is not the wind. Wren doe (ready)
Wren's hand moves before the argument between should and shouldn't can finish. H (ready)
The Brook Woman is quiet long enough that the stream fills all the silence. Then (ready)
Wren doesn't let the cup cool. "The path," she says — it comes out more demand t (ready)
Old Maret's spoon makes one slow circle. "The first was a soldier — confident, t (ready)
Wren turns her back on the stream and the Brook Woman's complicated expression, (ready)
The Ember sits warm against Wren's borrowed breastplate as she asks. The Brook W (ready)
Wren does not let herself think. She steps forward and closes both gauntleted ha (ready, ending)
The Brook Woman sets the box on her knee, both hands resting flat on the wood. " (ready)
"He's dead," Wren says, and the honesty of it is a strange relief — like setting (ready)
Wren's mouth opens, closes, and then does something a real knight would probably (ready)
Wren's directness catches the brook woman mid-pause. "Is the Ember in that box," (ready)
"Then name it," Wren says, steadier than she expected. "A task, a test — anythin (ready)
"Fever," Wren says, and the word comes out steadier than she has any right to ex (ready)
Wren doesn't answer right away. Instead her eyes drift — just slightly, just nat (ready)
Wren twists the buckle strap until the scratched letters face her. She reads the (ready)
The Brook Woman's hands go still on the wood. The question hangs in the mist a m (ready)
Wren stands. The cup goes back on the stone — she has directions, she doesn't ne (ready)
Wren sets the cup down and turns. The thing stands at the tree line — taller tha (ready)
The not-hurrying is over. Wren runs — armor crashing, mist spraying around her b (ready)
Wren counts three steps past a white-barked trunk and steps sideways into the ga (ready)
Wren's gauntlet closes around the lantern — cold stone, a swing of the grey pane (ready)
Wren straightens. Her gauntlet is still extended — she can feel the Ember's warm (ready)
Wren runs west. The Thornwood gets no quieter for the going — if anything, the a (ready)
Wren stops. The decision happens before she knows she's made it — boots skidding (ready)
The wheat is chest-high and the armor is heavy and Wren doesn't care about eithe (ready, ending)
Wren stops at the field-edge, one boot almost in the road-rut. The Ember sits wa (ready)
Wren steps left before her courage can change its mind. The Thornwood takes her (ready)
The King's Road earns its name before Wren has walked an hour — packed gravel br (ready)
Wren sits — a process that involves a small avalanche of metal and a suppressed (ready)
Wren plants her feet wider and does not sit. "What's in the pot?" she asks, beca (ready)
The root-ridged rise is harder to climb than it looks — armor clanking, mist cli (ready)
The path drops steeply, roots serving as rough stairs, and Wren descends into co (ready)
Wren looks at Old Maret, then at the mule, then back at Old Maret. "Come with me (ready)
"How did you come to have it?" Wren asks. It comes out blunter than she intends, (ready)
"What walks the river path?" Wren asks. The brook woman lifts her clay jar, rega (ready)
Wren's gaze keeps snagging on the box. It rests on dry stone as though the brook (ready)
Wren takes a breath that ghosts in the cold air. "He died," she says. "The knigh (ready)
Wren opens her mouth to answer — and closes it again. The armor is borrowed. The (ready)
The brook_woman's pale eyes settle on Wren with the patience of someone who has (ready)
The brook_woman turns fully, clay jar still in hand, water trickling over her fi (ready)
Wren's hand moves before the sensible part of her can argue. The box is lighter (ready)
The branch moves again — not wind, not squirrel — and Wren's hand finds the swor (ready)
Wren breathes out — the loud kind she has been embarrassed by since entering the (ready)
The branch-sound pulls Wren's head around before she decides to turn it. Her gau (ready)
Wren straightens — as much as the pauldron allows — and says, simply, "He's dead (ready)
Wren takes a breath. The pauldron continues its slow rebellion. "Did you know hi (ready)
Wren does two things at once: sidesteps to put herself between the brook_woman a (ready)
Wren makes herself very still — no small achievement in plate armour that ring (ready)
Wren moves before she thinks it through — three clanking steps that plant her be (ready)
Wren makes herself hold still — a harder trick in borrowed armor than it sounds, (ready)
Wren pulls the parchment from under the breastplate, smooths it on her knee, and (ready)
"What became of them?" Wren asks. Her voice comes out steadier than she feels, w (ready)
"Your name," Wren says, still holding the open box. "And why you sound relieved (ready)
Wren closes the box — snap of the sun clasp, decisive — and tucks it under o (ready)
"Borrowed," Wren says, before she can think of a better answer. "He died three d (ready)
Wren's mouth opens to answer — borrowed, obviously — but what comes out instead (ready)
Wren draws herself up to her full height, which is not much when the armour adds (ready)
Wren's hand drops to the sword hilt — an instinct borrowed from armor that rem (ready)
"Then name it." The words are out before Wren has properly thought them through, (ready)
"What's alive in there?" Wren asks. She surprises herself — the words come out s (ready)
The lie arrives before she has quite decided to tell it. "A thrown shoe," Wren s (ready)
Wren exhales something that is not quite a sigh and not quite a prayer, pulls th (ready)
Wren walks faster. The armor does not make this graceful — the pauldrons sway, t (ready)
Wren stops. Half a breath later, behind her: nothing. Whatever-where-footsteps-w (ready)
Wren takes a breath and decides the truth is probably easier to keep straight th (ready)
Wren does the only sensible thing: she steps sideways, out of the guard's line o (ready)
Wren picks up the bowl. It is warm against her gauntlets. She sits. "The Ember o (ready)
Wren picks up the bowl. It is hot against her gauntlet, so she pulls the glove o (ready)
Wren sits on the nearest stone — armor clanking against packed earth — and the f (ready)
Wren pauses on the far bank and turns. Old Maret hasn't stirred from her fire †(ready)
Wren wraps both hands around the clay cup and tells her. All of it: the fever, t (ready)
Wren does not touch the cup. She wraps her gauntleted hands around her knees ins (ready)
"Three nights," Old Maret says, before Wren has finished asking. "Two, if you co (ready)
"How did you know?" Wren asks, because the alternative is sitting there with her (ready)
The truth turns out to be three words. 'He's dead. Fever.' Wren says it flatly, (ready)
"The Ember," Wren says, before the more sensible part of her can stop the rest. (ready)
Wren turns. The mist parts around something tall and very still at the treeline (ready)
"You said he wasn't supposed to give it away." Wren doesn't phrase it as a quest (ready)
The brook_woman collects the box from the flat rock without breaking stride, and (ready)
Wren does not move away from the water. Not yet. Her eyes go to the box on the f (ready)
Wren doesn't ask what he meant the first time. She tucks the box under one arm — (ready)
Wren asks before she can stop herself. The brook_woman pauses, half-turned towar (ready)
The Brook Woman's hand lifts from the clasp. Not reluctantly — decisively, the w (ready)
The sword clears the scabbard with a sound the stream water doesn't cover. Heavi (ready)
Wren takes the tea — her feet are already complaining, and the root-brew smells (draft)
"The longer path," Wren says. She means it more firmly than she expected. Old Ma (ready)
Wren pulls the sword free — it catches the grey mist-light and declares itself p (ready)
Wren takes two careful steps backward until her boot heel finds wet stone and th (ready)
Wren turns upstream without quite meaning to, boots splashing at the brook's edg (ready)
Wren turns from the brook_woman and steps upstream, armor rattling in the quiet. (draft)
Wren drains the broth — woodsmoke and something herbal, warm enough to reach whe (ready)
Wren picks up the cup. The broth is earthy and warm and tastes of something she (ready)
"Where," says Wren, and the word comes out steadier than she expected. Old Maret (draft)
Maret sets the spoon down at last. "He was a capable man," she says, in the tone (draft)
"The dead knight's," Wren says. "He died three days ago. The parchment still nee (draft)
Wren reaches for the cup. It is, she decides, better than answering. The broth i (draft)
Ashwick squats at the crossroads like a town that never decided whether to grow (draft)
The guard's warning follows Wren up the King's Road for a quarter-mile before sh (draft)
Wren's hand moves before her head has quite finished the plan. She pulls the que (draft)
"A moment," Wren says, and moves toward the wood's edge with as much dignity as (draft)
Wren pulls off her right gauntlet, tucks it under her arm, and reaches for the b (draft)
Wren takes one deliberate step back — not far, but enough. The box stays extende (draft)
The brook woman steps forward — something more settled in the motion than before (draft)
Wren stays. The armour makes hasty exits awkward, but mostly it's the amber ligh (draft)
Wren stops three steps up the path. The Brook Woman said go. The parchment says (draft)
Wren stops at the first oak wide enough to give her back a solid wall — three st (draft)
Wren closes the box and takes three steps toward the treeline before Elsin's han (draft)
Elsin does not say go. She doesn't have to. Her eyes are already on the trees. W (draft)
"Wren," she says, and the word comes out quieter than she intended — just a name (draft)
"Wren," she says — just that, the way you hand someone something fragile. "My na (draft)
The brook woman holds the box out. Wren takes it — lighter than it looks — and s (draft)
Wren considers the box, the clasp, the brook woman's thumb resting patient and s (draft)
"Wait," Wren says, before her feet quite decide to move. "The box — what was i (draft)
Wren sets off northeast along the streambank, the wooden box tucked carefully ag (draft)
Ten steps. Wren counts them. The armor counts them louder. At the lantern she cr (draft)
Wren turns. This is, she privately admits, probably a bad idea — but so was ta (draft)
Wren's hand leaves the hilt. This takes more effort than drawing the sword would (draft)
Wren does the sensible thing: she turns east and walks. The sword comes with her (draft)
Wren stares at the open palm. There is nothing in it — or not nothing: a folded (draft)
Wren stares at the open hand for one more second. Then she reaches out — not for (draft, ending)